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| Reviews for HeartHolding Palm |
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   SaveMeToo 3/16/05 . chapter 1Good EMOtion Mallory, but some of the rythme is odd... |
| simpleplan13 3/15/05 . chapter 1 nice |
| TheFlameofSilver 3/13/05 . chapter 1 I liked the desriptions and metaphors in this, but I think the rhyming and the overall flow of the poem needs work. I enjoyed it nonetheless |
| TheAngelofhope 3/13/05 . chapter 1 It was rather good. Nice job. |
