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Reviews For: HeartHolding Palm

SaveMeToo
2005-03-16
ch 1,
abuseGood EMOtion Mallory, but some of the rythme is odd...
simpleplan13
2005-03-15
ch 1,
abusenice
TheFlameofSilver
2005-03-13
ch 1,
abuseI liked the desriptions and metaphors in this, but I think the rhyming and the overall flow of the poem needs work. I enjoyed it nonetheless
TheAngelofhope
2005-03-13
ch 1,
abuseIt was rather good. Nice job.
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