|Reviews for HeartHolding Palm|
| SaveMeToo 3/16/05 . chapter 1
Good EMOtion Mallory, but some of the rythme is odd...
| simpleplan13 3/15/05 . chapter 1
| TheFlameofSilver 3/13/05 . chapter 1
I liked the desriptions and metaphors in this, but I think the rhyming and the overall flow of the poem needs work. I enjoyed it nonetheless
| TheAngelofhope 3/13/05 . chapter 1
It was rather good. Nice job.