FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| SaveMeToo 2005-03-16 ch 1,  | abuseGood EMOtion Mallory, but some of the rythme is odd... |
| simpleplan13 2005-03-15 ch 1, | abusenice |
| TheFlameofSilver 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI liked the desriptions and metaphors in this, but I think the rhyming and the overall flow of the poem needs work. I enjoyed it nonetheless |
| TheAngelofhope 2005-03-13 ch 1, | abuseIt was rather good. Nice job. |