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| tim t 2005-03-14 ch 1,  | The story is very beautiful...sad, but beautiful. I especially enjoyed the complexities of the world you've created and intense emotions you were able convey through the dialogues. I also love the subtle details and the smooth pace of the story...it really draws you in. Although occasionally, a little too much action gets compacted into a single sentence. You have an incredible talent with words. |