^_^ I liked this story so much that when I forgot where to find this one, I was really frantic xD! I love thiss story!

Yeah, you definitly earned those nicknames. Overall it was an amazing story!

Great story! It was fantastic! Though is not much of a yaoi story, since yaoi is a story about a boy loving another boy, and the main character of this story loved a girl, even if he was with a boy through most of the story. Still it was a great fantasy story!

Great so far. I'm looking forward to reading the rest. ^^

I thought this story was great. Very interesting. Kudos for finishing it.

So basically you're a great writer but I can't ever read anything you write ever again ^_^. I'm allergic to sad endings. Now I have to find something happy before I get hives.

I don't remember if I reviewed the last thing I read of yours but I've been going through your stuff XD since you commented on me and all I wanted to see what you had to offer

So far I like it a lot. You're very creative and the way you tell a story is very interesting and detailed. Only thing that's not quite as good that I can see is sometimes you get a little wordy and/or redundant. This is the worst example I've found (so you can see it's not that bad) but you might want to try working on it anyway ^__^.

"...holding a bowl of the steaming soup that had come directly from the kettle which was full of soup."

People don't get soup from kettles full of something else. *goes to read the rest~!*

Great Prologue, i love prologues. They r fun 2 read, i actually attempted a prologue, so if u wanna read it, go 2 "Hell Fire" in mi story list. I think it is one of my better works.Anyway, great job and thanks 4 da reviews, ^-^ ~devil-apprentice~

Hey, it's Chainlink/Beth from Nano/Xanga here. Wow. Just read through the whole thing and... Wow.

Hee. You really are sadistic aren't you? Then again, I guess I am too since I enjoyed it as much as I did.

You made me cry. That's very mean of you. I started crying when Tarin died and I've been crying since. Wow. You rock, Skyla.

Muhahaha, FIRE!

OK, went back and reread ch5 after I got to here and checked my e-mails. Wow, I was going to read ch15 pt I but I forgot what happened in ch14, powerful stuff!P.S. That whole scene just fit on my entire window.P.P.S. And this is how I pass time before watching FMA! *menatlly stabs self*

heheh...sweet dude. i'm diggin the story. hope you don't get busted.

Poor Tarin! That would suck!

I KNEW IT! Reyen WAS dead and it WAS Lojan! And now Dalian's got those jewels stuck on him, hmm.

Edited... Lol! That's OK I can very well gues what happened there. Good chapter, must read next chapter.