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Tomoko 2008-09-19 . chapter 21
^_^ I liked this story so much that when I forgot where to find this one, I was really frantic xD! I love thiss story!
efphrim 2008-04-05 . chapter 22
Yeah, you definitly earned those nicknames. Overall it was an amazing story!
True.Randomness 2008-01-22 . chapter 22
Great story! It was fantastic! Though is not much of a yaoi story, since yaoi is a story about a boy loving another boy, and the main character of this story loved a girl, even if he was with a boy through most of the story. Still it was a great fantasy story!
IkemasenOokami 2007-03-06 . chapter 2
Great so far. I'm looking forward to reading the rest. ^^
tmelange1 2006-04-22 . chapter 22
I thought this story was great. Very interesting. Kudos for finishing it.
Yoyo-chan 2005-10-18 . chapter 22
So basically you're a great writer but I can't ever read anything you write ever again ^_^. I'm allergic to sad endings. Now I have to find something happy before I get hives.
Yoyo-chan 2005-10-18 . chapter 4
I don't remember if I reviewed the last thing I read of yours but I've been going through your stuff XD since you commented on me and all I wanted to see what you had to offer

So far I like it a lot. You're very creative and the way you tell a story is very interesting and detailed. Only thing that's not quite as good that I can see is sometimes you get a little wordy and/or redundant. This is the worst example I've found (so you can see it's not that bad) but you might want to try working on it anyway ^__^.

"...holding a bowl of the steaming soup that had come directly from the kettle which was full of soup."

People don't get soup from kettles full of something else. *goes to read the rest~!*
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-06-08 . chapter 1
Great Prologue, i love prologues. They r fun 2 read, i actually attempted a prologue, so if u wanna read it, go 2 "Hell Fire" in mi story list. I think it is one of my better works.Anyway, great job and thanks 4 da reviews, ^-^ ~devil-apprentice~
Chainlinks 2005-04-18 . chapter 22
Hey, it's Chainlink/Beth from Nano/Xanga here. Wow. Just read through the whole thing and... Wow.

Hee. You really are sadistic aren't you? Then again, I guess I am too since I enjoyed it as much as I did.

You made me cry. That's very mean of you. I started crying when Tarin died and I've been crying since. Wow. You rock, Skyla.
Chicanery A. Beguile 2005-04-02 . chapter 17
Muhahaha, FIRE!
Chicanery A. Beguile 2005-04-02 . chapter 15
OK, went back and reread ch5 after I got to here and checked my e-mails. Wow, I was going to read ch15 pt I but I forgot what happened in ch14, powerful stuff!P.S. That whole scene just fit on my entire window.P.P.S. And this is how I pass time before watching FMA! *menatlly stabs self*
Cass-7 2005-04-02 . chapter 6
heheh...sweet dude. i'm diggin the story. hope you don't get busted.
Chicanery A. Beguile 2005-03-31 . chapter 10
Poor Tarin! That would suck!
Chicanery A. Beguile 2005-03-31 . chapter 7
I KNEW IT! Reyen WAS dead and it WAS Lojan! And now Dalian's got those jewels stuck on him, hmm.
Chicanery A. Beguile 2005-03-31 . chapter 6
Edited... Lol! That's OK I can very well gues what happened there. Good chapter, must read next chapter.
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