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| Tomoko 2008-09-19 ch 21, anon. | abuse^_^ I liked this story so much that when I forgot where to find this one, I was really frantic xD! I love thiss story! |
| efphrim 2008-04-05 ch 22,  | abuseYeah, you definitly earned those nicknames. Overall it was an amazing story! |
| True.Randomness 2008-01-22 ch 22, | abuseGreat story! It was fantastic! Though is not much of a yaoi story, since yaoi is a story about a boy loving another boy, and the main character of this story loved a girl, even if he was with a boy through most of the story. Still it was a great fantasy story! |
| IkemasenOokami 2007-03-06 ch 2, | abuseGreat so far. I'm looking forward to reading the rest. ^^ |
| tmelange1 2006-04-22 ch 22, | abuseI thought this story was great. Very interesting. Kudos for finishing it. |
| Yoyo-chan 2005-10-18 ch 22, | abuseSo basically you're a great writer but I can't ever read anything you write ever again ^_^. I'm allergic to sad endings. Now I have to find something happy before I get hives. |
| Yoyo-chan 2005-10-18 ch 4, | abuseI don't remember if I reviewed the last thing I read of yours but I've been going through your stuff XD since you commented on me and all I wanted to see what you had to offer So far I like it a lot. You're very creative and the way you tell a story is very interesting and detailed. Only thing that's not quite as good that I can see is sometimes you get a little wordy and/or redundant. This is the worst example I've found (so you can see it's not that bad) but you might want to try working on it anyway ^__^. "...holding a bowl of the steaming soup that had come directly from the kettle which was full of soup." People don't get soup from kettles full of something else. *goes to read the rest~!* |
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseGreat Prologue, i love prologues. They r fun 2 read, i actually attempted a prologue, so if u wanna read it, go 2 "Hell Fire" in mi story list. I think it is one of my better works.Anyway, great job and thanks 4 da reviews, ^-^ ~devil-apprentice~ |
| Chainlinks 2005-04-18 ch 22, | abuseHey, it's Chainlink/Beth from Nano/Xanga here. Wow. Just read through the whole thing and... Wow. Hee. You really are sadistic aren't you? Then again, I guess I am too since I enjoyed it as much as I did. You made me cry. That's very mean of you. I started crying when Tarin died and I've been crying since. Wow. You rock, Skyla. |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2005-04-02 ch 17, | abuseMuhahaha, FIRE! |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2005-04-02 ch 15, | abuseOK, went back and reread ch5 after I got to here and checked my e-mails. Wow, I was going to read ch15 pt I but I forgot what happened in ch14, powerful stuff!P.S. That whole scene just fit on my entire window.P.P.S. And this is how I pass time before watching FMA! *menatlly stabs self* |
| Cass-7 2005-04-02 ch 6, | abuseheheh...sweet dude. i'm diggin the story. hope you don't get busted. |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2005-03-31 ch 10, | abusePoor Tarin! That would suck! |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2005-03-31 ch 7, | abuseI KNEW IT! Reyen WAS dead and it WAS Lojan! And now Dalian's got those jewels stuck on him, hmm. |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2005-03-31 ch 6, | abuseEdited... Lol! That's OK I can very well gues what happened there. Good chapter, must read next chapter. |