I like this chapter. I love how you refer to God as "my Sovereign," and how you refer to the faith as "being in the King's service." It's all so metaphorical. (I think that's the right term. Allegorical?)

No E in judgment. :)

Love it!

Very introspective! I like the counselor's quote- it's a good sum of Christianity. (I'm assuming your Christian, right?)

My only criticism, I think, would be to cut out the explanations of exactly how you half-turned your head. That's not necessarily. Um... oh, and you don't need to capitalize Guide or Counselor unless you're using that as you woul duse a name. (Or unless it refers to God.)

Sorry if you don't like criticism... I mean it in a helpful way. Heh.

Oh, and Frank Peretti ROCKS!