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| marshbar960 2005-07-21 ch 1,   | i'm sorry about your grampa but he's lucky to have a grandson like you that will stick by him through thick and thin. additionally, I'm almost positive that he'll enjoy this poem. thanks for sharing and keep writing! p.s. God loves you and so do I! |
| Wing Chant 2005-05-26 ch 1, | This poem was cute, and I'm sure it brightened his day to hear such a heartwarming poem from his Grandson. How is he doing now? =D I love the humor in your lines, they are hilarious lol. loserz. ;) |
| Orphans' Wail 2005-04-17 ch 1, | hey man, I took a hiatus some time ago, but I hope your grandfather is ok. I really like the simplicity of this poem. It sort of emphasizes the use of poetry a long time ago, as simply skilled communication. |
| ritalin 2005-04-12 ch 1, | Aww, that is so sweet. I'm very sorry about your Grandfather, though, and I hope he's feeling much better. =) I stumbled upon your user completely by accident, but your work is very good... and you remind me somewhat of me. As well as one of my friend's friends, or at least from what I've heard...Anyway, before I write you an essay, I'll wrap it up. Keep up the good work! It's beautiful. =) |
| Opium Hex 2005-03-23 ch 1, | Your grandfather is a lucky man to have you :) By the way, you've reviewed my work as Ruby Woo...I won't be using that name any more, so check out OpiumHex...lots of new stuff :D |
| citrus scented 2005-03-21 ch 1, | aww swet poem! its amazing how you make it so light hearted for such a heavy subject, but its really heartwarming I hope your grandad likes it. |