this is really interesting i need a new chapter!

cool, ur an amazing writer...

come on update plz

But what significance would her name have to Julia? Hm. I wonder if she knows it somehow? And I'm interested to see how Corel's going to fit into everything... another problem for poor Rena, I'm guessing.

Update soon!

Corel. i mean, perhaps she'll acidentally help her, but chances are everythings going to be even more of a mess. please update soon!

pretty intense in a way.. i enjoyed.. =)

I've said it before nad i'll say it again. You are a way better author then I'll ever be. Anyway, great job on this. I enjoyed reading this chapter and i can't wait for more from you.

Good chapter. Aww, poor Rena. Maybe Julia will save her? I hope so, I want her to shoot Crash with one her her WW2 guns. ^_^

~Isa~

YOU ROCK MY SOCKS IN A BOX WITH A FREAKING FOX WHO WEARS YELLOW SMOCKS AND TALKS TO CROCS!(h e l l ya baby!) no im serious this is the most awesomeist story like EVER)

::snaps fingers:: darn! And she was so close to getting away! hey, maybe there's still hope... ::bright smile::

or not. because i doubt they'll underestimate her...

sorry 4 the short review, fireworks just started...

"but he had to admit. This girl was ten times more precarious than the rest." umm, grammar issue, I'm surpirsed I never see stuff like this in your work. I should probably explain, the period after admit it should be a comma and the 't' in this should be lowercase.

other then that this chapter was awesome. But then again your stories are always aweosme, at least the ones i read. please update soon.

this is so awesome that I think I'm going to go out and scream out at the world that you are an awesome writer and have the most vivid and insightful imagination on this planet(and on every other planet at that)! THIS IS SO AWESOME THAT IF YOU DONT MAKE IT INTO A NOVEL...I WILL PERSONALLY HUNT YOU DOWN, SAW YOUR HEAD OFF WITH A CHAINSAW, CHEW OFF YOUR FINGERS/TOES, AND STAB YOUR BODY A THOUSAND TIMES! but really, you should serious make this into a book and sell it. IT'LL BE BIGGER THAN HARRY POTTER!(if you call harry potter really big that is)

First off, I enjoy your story but what I was wondering is why you picked Detroit as your setting...I wonder.

I'm seriously sitting on the edge of my seat. You had to elave us off like that. You know I totally forgot about checking up on this story after like the first two weeks of may. But now that you have moe chapters I hope the next one comes a little sooner-ish. I'm in a strange mood right now. Just update soon.

Very good story. Hope for updates soon.

Well, the police are gonna have one hell of a job finding Rena if she's 4 centuries in the future, that's all I can say. Good chapter. I wonder if Crash's feeling is right, and he knows where Rena is...? Also, if he thinks Rena could be dead, then maybe the antique shop is dangerous in some way... *frowns in thought*

Hey, you better get the next chapter up, because a lot of thinking gives me migraines. ^_^

~Isa Koliki~