um... me being a girl dont really like how you've made my gender EVIL!! BUT this little 'short' story is quite good! i also had to do sumthing like that for my history class but it wasn't near as short or near as good!! quantiy is good - but quaility is even BETTER!!

Hm ... okay, I guess. But why was evil a girl? WHY ARE THE WOMEN ALWAYS EVIL?! More importantly, why are those old stories with evil women in them always written by MALES? Ack. The ego of the ancient males were even greater than mine; and such is a great feat, as my ego is huge. Ahem. Anyway. The story was short, and not really a story, more of a fact-text (well, not really, but you get my point). Still, good job.

Its corny. That's all I can say.