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| oohaysemag2001 2005-12-04 ch 1, | Your poem conveys a lot of mix emotions. Strength to survive The Courage to change The ability to hold back Determination to stay as you are And acknowledgment that a side of you is gone Powerful! TTFN Poem Critic |
| FELICIA-SPENCER 2005-05-04 ch 1, | Sniff sniff...so sad. Now you've made me cry. I loved the poem, and it just goes to prove that the past should be left in the past. We're all human and mistakes are the things we'll always make. So even though it's hard to forget, we can still forgive...and move on and make new memories. Sweet memories. (But it goes both ways.) So quit frowning and writing angsty poems, and forgive the girl. (and vice versa.) Wink..wink...hint...hint. Loved the poem. It's great!! :) |
| Kriss-C 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Great poem honey... A little mean but you already know that... But still your writing is wonderful... |