Can so relate to this one - wonerful job, keep up the great work!!

awesome poem, especially the butterfly bits and the ending is amazing.

This was very good. Well written, with a good rhythm.

So sad. I read the title and summary of this one, and it looked like the only one on the page of new love poems that would actually be romantic, so I jumped on the chance to read it. It was loving, for sure, but it wasn't very romantic, rather an expression of. . .anxiety. But this isn't detrimental to the poem itself. More like a bit of a missleading summary.

All in all, good work. Just ignore my droning if it annoys you; I know I wasn't very contructively critical.

You´ve given butterflies a new look!