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| HiddenFlame42 2005-04-17 ch 1,   | Can so relate to this one - wonerful job, keep up the great work!! |
| myno 2005-03-25 ch 1, | awesome poem, especially the butterfly bits and the ending is amazing. |
| DementedOracle 2005-03-14 ch 1, | This was very good. Well written, with a good rhythm. So sad. I read the title and summary of this one, and it looked like the only one on the page of new love poems that would actually be romantic, so I jumped on the chance to read it. It was loving, for sure, but it wasn't very romantic, rather an expression of. . .anxiety. But this isn't detrimental to the poem itself. More like a bit of a missleading summary. All in all, good work. Just ignore my droning if it annoys you; I know I wasn't very contructively critical. |
| Munchin 2005-03-14 ch 1, | You´ve given butterflies a new look! |