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| emilyrachel18 2006-04-24 ch 1,   | I know who this is written about and i think it's really weird that i never reviewed this one esp as it was me that was advising you in that direction, i'm sorry. I think we both know though that that was the best decision you ever made. No1 should go through what he put you through mentally especially someone as special as you |
| AlwaysAmberella 2005-04-05 ch 1, | this is good, but it leaves much to be answered, like what other things were putting pressure on the relationship. Lady Solitaire |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-04-03 ch 1, | wow, the last line is the best, i can really really relate to this, in my opinion i think you should just do what makes you happy, even if breaking up would make you sad to begin with... well, i always think in terms of "what'll it be like in then long run?" like the pain will fade in time. anyway, i saw two ers but no big deal - "a lone" - isn't that two words?! and "people have sad", apart from this i love the poem x weasel within x |
| Angel Underneath 2005-04-01 ch 1, | this is good, i like... recently broke up with my boyfriend a few days ago so this is kinda enlightening! |
| Infection 2005-03-31 ch 1, | you're a very talented writer... i also, loved the last two lines, esp. the ending...a superb, and emmotional poem.~infection~ |
| 24 days of iceCold 2005-03-30 ch 1, | man girl u got talent don't let anyone tell u diffrent |
| dancingintherain 2005-03-30 ch 1, | aw, i hope everything turns out betta for you...asap newayz, i love the last wo lines, esp. the ending... muchlUB-kerr |
| Tears of IceFire 2005-03-29 ch 1, | wow. I like it alot. Itz really powerful--I can feel the depth of it... |
| GirlNamedLiv 2005-03-28 ch 1, | yeah i just went through a breakup so i kno how thats gotta feel like, cept i dont cut. good poem. |
| dragonsdream13 2005-03-28 ch 1, | i went through the same thing a few days ago... except i ended up actually breaking up with the person. great job.-DragonsDream |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-03-19 ch 1, | If someone is hurting you then get out, no one needs someone else hurting them on top of everything. But if its real love then you should tell him/her this and deal with it them. Raw emotion is coming from this poem, very powerful. Keep it up. |
| Lady DreamWriter 2005-03-16 ch 1, | Wonderful work like always. If the person is screwing you up that bad, dump his or her ** and start all over again. I wrote a new poem that might help you out. It's called "The Price". Hope to hear from you soon. |
| angel-of-woe 2005-03-15 ch 1, | nice poem for reading! i liked all the effects your volcabuary had on it.. |
| Broken Melody 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Interesting yet pretty or so pretty! |
| peaceman4ever 2005-03-15 ch 1, | wow, tihs is ONE VERY EMOTIONAL POEM. |