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| You Make Me Smile A Lot 2007-08-13 ch 1,   | I like how you can almost feel the blood lust and a yearning for an end in the beginning then it switches to someone whose feelings are completely opposite. Very good! |
| Theory Of The 4th Dimension 2005-11-15 ch 1, | This was so cool and breath-taking. I love poems with this high level of intensity. So well-written and nice word choices. |
| Not Quite Dry Eyed 2005-04-20 ch 1, | AW that is so sad :'( i like it a lot though great job keep writing 4 eva and always Please R&R some of my stuff Scarred Heart |
| The tribes tale 2005-04-06 ch 1, | amazing imagrey, i felt like i was there, though a sad topic the beauty in use of words shines through |
| AlwaysAmberella 2005-04-05 ch 1, | this is so sad, I really love it. Your writing seems so real. I can picture everything that was described in the poem. Lady Solitaire |
| inferno tempest 2005-04-04 ch 1, | loads of emotion!! liked the imagery! :P |
| Infection 2005-04-02 ch 1, | A superb poem, i felt the emotion and anger throughout the poem. i also loved the begining it was a super start.~infection~ |
| blackoutroses 2005-04-01 ch 1, | really intense-you can create such vivid imagery~nicely written! |
| Daisy Decamps 2005-03-30 ch 1, | Wow. Pretty powerful, although some parts were kinda confusing. The slashing blood parts were gruesome. Good job. |
| Tears of IceFire 2005-03-28 ch 1, | ok, that scares me. Alot. I don't understand why anyone would do that. To me it seems the cowards way out. But, I guess at some point, life's unbearable. But I really like it. If you get a chance read some of my stuff ^^ |
| dragonsdream13 2005-03-28 ch 1, | very sad. |
| intense*obscene 2005-03-26 ch 1, | wow... really deep, you had something going on in there that I couldn't put my finger on, it's just amazing... wow... |
| QueenVixta 2005-03-26 ch 1, | This beautiful. Really touching ending, I like how you've told a story through it. QueenVixta x |
| Venustas iaceo 2005-03-24 ch 1, | Hello. I've seen your name several times on this site, and finally decided to Read and Review one of your poems. I must say... I didn't quite size up to my standards only because the flow of it seemed just a little off somehow... I'm not sure. *shrugs* However, don't feel too bad. I'm not saying that it's crap. It's good. I like it. It's just not exceptional. You've got a lot of talent in there, I'll read more. Let's see if I can find something of my tastes... |
| Shadowed Mind 2005-03-22 ch 1, | beautiful, absolutely beautiful, intense and powerful...you write with such elegance. stay strong. all my love, shadowed mind |