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| The Alien from Uranus 2005-06-22 ch 1,   | Other than a few typoes, this was well written, and I normally don't like free-verse. Your ussage of "Heart, Life, and Soul" was actually more meaningful than monotonous. Most writers have trouble pulling off clever repetition. ~Straight from Uranus~ P.S. Keep trying, and I know you'll get better at it. Like most other things, writing takes practice. |