Reviews for Once Upon A Time - FictionPress.com

The Alien from Uranus 2005-06-22 ch 1,	This could somehow work as a parody if you worded it a little differently in some places. By the way, how am I powerful? Strange, I can understand--but powerful? ^_~ Y'know I'm just teasing, right? ~Straight from Uranus~ P.S. What's with this: "AND BRING ON THE SPORK ALIEN!" If you write a poem about a bowl of ravioli, I might get out a spork and eat it, if that's what you mean.
Nastrond 2005-03-25 ch 1,	I like it, though I do have ideas for it though:1- MAKE IT LONGER, I think this review will be longer than the poem.2- Elaberate, it might be the same as 1 but I mean it.3-Maybe you could use some examples, that would make the poem more interesting.Thats all, for that part of this review, but let me tell you the good things: good idea/ good format/ good bye
lady-void 2005-03-14 ch 1,	I quite like the idea behind this poem, but it seems extremely disjointed and could do with some connections linking the ideas together. Work at it, add a little more content and it could be very interesting!
kaiialyne 2005-03-14 ch 1,	Hmm...I don't think I really get it. IMO, it could be a bit clearer.
Colton Keith 2005-03-14 ch 1,	Not very good at all. There's not much to review with this poem.