heh, the one time where the three of them can actually be serious...=D well the bluffs really are amazing =D

very descriptive, i found myself going back there mentally after this...this was great

Loved the idea behind this. There were some overly descriptive paragraphs, mainly in the beginning, but once we read about "the place", it's all good from there. The ending was sweet and full of wonder. Just remember that you don't have to attatch an adjective to every little noun you find -- it will more than likely sound forced and awkward.