Reviews for When I'm Gone - FictionPress.com

Rachel Peterson 2006-02-21 ch 1,	beautiful, in a traditoinal sort of way. strongly written.
MoOkiie 2005-03-24 ch 1,	I like it alot. Although there's barely any rhyming, but i like the description of how it'll be when "i'm gone". i especially like the last 4 lines.
Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-03-20 ch 1,	I loved this. Beautiful and amazing. I perhaps got the meaning of God in this one. But that was my veiw. As when we loose faith we feel this sudden leaving from us...yet I think God mourns for it...anyways. Just my thoughts. I loved this. It was simply beautiful.
WarriorHeart 2005-03-17 ch 1,	I really liked it. I thought it was going to be one of those regular old poems about nature and their death, so when I got to the end about the friend it was a nice surprise and really made the poem good.