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| little smiles 2007-03-24 ch 1,   | This is really beautiful and moving, you capture the emotion perfectly. I'm sure there are so many people who can relate to the situation; you fall in love, thinking it will last forever, only to be crushed. Funny how the word "Friends" can suddenly be the hardest blow. |
| D'Haran Lord 2006-02-18 ch 1, | I loved this poem, you seem so passionate about it and the reader can tell! Keep it up! |
| simpleplan13 2005-04-08 ch 1, | i like it.. i can totally relate.. beautiful job.. tahnks for your review |
| AllyCred 2005-03-21 ch 1, | i like it a lot...i have to say its very descriptive and has a lot of emotion coming through...i like it. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| Anray Jzitusia 2005-03-21 ch 1, | Really good poem, I liked it alot ^_^ One thing though, it was a little vague on some things, if that is what you wanted, great. Really good again.Keep writingLaters P.S.Thanks for the R&R, sorry it took so long to get back to you. |
| Steel Winged Angel 2005-03-21 ch 1, | "Friends, that word seems way below my feelings for you!" Reminds me of how I felt when my bf wanted to just be friends. The word just seems dull and forlorn compared to the beauty of love. Beautiful poem Ellen. I really enjoyed it. Keep writing!~Hawke |
| NicolePartier 2005-03-19 ch 1, | aww |
| Breaking Heart 2005-03-18 ch 1, | "And a knot in my throath unables me to speak"... maybe that could've been put differently, but I see where it's going. I like it. thanks for reviewing mine, too.~erin aka emma |
| Matthew James Current 2005-03-16 ch 1, | Lovely write ginny. This was heartfelt and touching. It seems like a combination of prose and poetry. I like the raw emotions and the effect they have on the reader. It's good to see another piece of yours. Keep on writing and let me know when you put out another piece so I can take a look at it okay? Thanks for your last review. I appreciate it. Take care! ^_^ |
| VintageStar 2005-03-15 ch 1, | I love this! Its really good, and i can understand how the person feels. |