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| oohaysemag2001 2005-12-11 ch 1,   | "In remembrance of Honey" Death is the end result of it all, but life holds many challenges.Its better to lived, then not to have lived at all. TTFN poem criticGreat Writing |
| Confused-Mind 2005-11-30 ch 1, | very sad ending, but powerful words. I'm interested in this topic and it really had an effect on me emotionally. Overall it's an excellent poem. Keep up the Great work! |
| Cloud Burst 2005-06-27 ch 1, | slightly disturbing, the shock that is and how u tell it. graet work! |
| Moonjava 2005-06-05 ch 1, | Oh, God that's so sad. The ending all most made me cry. I can connect with this piece hear. Very truly sad but well written. |
| darkpaladin13 2005-06-04 ch 1, | I like it. Very descriptive. It's not overly dramatic like a lot of other "writers" do here. And Noelle is right, the ending really took this to another level. Great work, keep it up. |
| poetic abortion 2005-05-26 ch 1, | the ending just broke me down in tears. this is such a wonderful and beautifully expressed poem, I could feel everything and could relate to this. my God, this is really frightening and yet as tragic and saddening as this is its beautiful. it shines with its own light and its own power that surounds it. ^_^ love it, the ending lines: " Honey ...? Honey!? " I could envision their loved one, be it a parent or husband calling this, and that made it even more tear jerking. well done! beautifully captured and expressed! keep up the good work! !~* noelle *~! |
| simpleplan13 2005-04-09 ch 1, | well i can relate to the cutting aspect and you described in wonderfully... teh nedig is so sad and well written |
| Abnormality 2005-03-14 ch 1, | Really deep, I've been really depressed lately, not suicidel, but stil... |
| Dying Without Gackt 2005-03-14 ch 1, | Wow that was very deep! So sad and such a tragic ending. I loved it! |