Reviews for removable discontinuities

Reviews For: removable discontinuities

simpleplan13 2005-04-10 ch 1,	abuseawesome format
Xavier Everett 2005-04-08 ch 1,	abuseI like this poem. It has a mutable quality, and you seem to skip from subject to subject seamlessy with such flawless links. Even if it is quite confusing. Keep writing, Xavier Everett
Crazy In 88 2005-04-01 ch 1,	abuseI really like this. Really. Great. But I know I should be more mean. Like- you need to work on your grammar and spelling. There are serious atrocities here. Just kidding- you know I enjoy your poems. But you do need to work on the grammar. lol. Good work again!_Yin
Anjeni Windsinger 2005-03-31 ch 1,	abuseI was positive that I had reviewed this... Anyway, I love it. I like math as well, and I'm currently attempting to read the Bible, so this was a very interesting read for me. Powerful words, you really know how to keep the attention of the readers - all in all, excellent work. Keep it up ^_^
Luneko 2005-03-16 ch 1,	abuseOne word synopsis: Splendid. Details: I love (love, love, love) your reference to dividing by zero. I have oft pondered zero (I'm bad at math, but I love theoretical physics) and its spiritual and philosophical relevance as a building block of the physical world. Also, I like your Biblical allusions, even if they do seem a little misogynistic. Even if I am switching the gender associations to that word. Maybe hyper-feminist is a more appropriate term. I like your word play so much I'm going to reread the last stanza where it is so deliciously abundant... Wow. Now I think I understand the context of the hyper-feminism. The whole poem is coming into focus. I love it even more now! But I wonder how many people will actually understand it...
poetic abortion 2005-03-15 ch 1,	abuseI found this worthy enough to review twice. (Kidding!! XD I know not funny. >=)~) Heck, maybe even a third time. XD giggels This poem was simply lovely, filled with such depth and beauty. Unique and enjoyable to read. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. !~* Noelle *~!
Eirien 2005-03-15 ch 1,	abuseWow. This is really impressive. Your imagery is great, and the way you combine mathematics (not that I understand much of it lol), Biblical allusions and the details of the relationship is very unique and well done.
Manuel Fajar 2005-03-14 ch 1,	abusegod,—woman, i'm listening to blues,&— you know how that warps a man's mental state, victoria,—black hair, shaggy,—ending, tipped in copper-red—lays calm at my feet, piano and guitar are taking off moonwards, i'm thinking about i to the i,—& how, it's roughly one fifth,—but not drinkable, you,—¿man's rib?—driving rhythm making red, heart,—throb in pain,—as deep bass riffs in thirds, staccato,—pound within vibrating drum, skins and bones,—making every feeling ache, for kisses pink & green,—spring harmony.
CrUcIfIeD bY tHe DeViL 2005-03-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseMiscarriage: I am so sorry if you were offended. TT.TT I have no control of my mind sometimes, once my mind is inspired I write until I am left satisfied. I had written a much lsrger poem but it was a totale wreck. I did not mean it that way. ^^; I understand if you can't forgive me. -.-; I was stupid to post that. ^^; I hope you accept my apology. I'm very sorry if I offended you in anyway! TT.TT Sinners: -.-; I was just checking if the format would come out right, I have yet to finish that and I believe I deleted that. ^^; I'm sorry if you feel that way, the thing popped into my mind and wouldn't leave until I finished writing it down. ^^; Again I am truely sorry if I offended you/sickened you. ^^; I expected someone to be appauled by that and I am sorry if you were offended by it. -.-; Poem: faints This was beautiful, the imagery was just so breath taking and powerful I felt like I wanted to weep. This peice is mezmerizing, almost addictive. I couldn't stop reading even if I tried my hardest to stop. (Which I didn't.) Beautifuly done and written so well. ^-^ Great job!! !~* Noelle; Kuri-Hoshi *~!

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