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| penname1920 2005-03-15 ch 1, | wow beautiful piece.i can feel the loneliness of the persona. love the words crystal cheeks... original!very well done! |
| peaceman4ever 2005-03-14 ch 1, | WOW, i love this poem, desribes alot of pain... |
| dustytiger 2005-03-14 ch 1, | wow, this is a great peice, i liked it a lot, wonderful work, thank you for sharing |