Wow, Heather... Very nice. i like how well it flowed and how well you made your point.

Great poem. Keep up the good work.

For some reason, I've grown infatuated with this particular poem.

Keep up the good work, mon cherri.

i love this poem, great imagery used. i can relate to this. i like how you linked the words lost and drowned with wind and tsunami. abrupt and powerful words - solitude, war - says it all.very very well done!

Free verse always seems to me lacking. But this was fun. I especially like "A makeshift doll in a tsunami" Great imagery. Great ending, too.

oh, how very true, i very much agree, great work, thank you for sharing