Fantastic. The simplistic style of this underlined the anger. Very enjoyable to read, and the last line was a delicious punch in the face.

Hm. You're definitely capable of better than that, Heather. I won't deny that it was interesting to some degree, but it was quote decorated. Very descriptive... And it got in the way of what it actually meant. When words distract you or clutter your mind from the meaning of the piece, it's not good, lol. I didn't really like your comparisons... They seemed totally meaningless. "A searing death, deeper than a canyon of fates"... What does that mean? All in all... It was okay. I think you have incredible talent.

I like this poem. Maybe it’s because I’ve been through the same thing (the treatment aspect and reaction alike) many, many times. I like the way it’s worded, casual and typical at first, but it ends in rather harsh drama. Very well written.

Not as good as the last poem. =/ But still fairly rad. It was kinda... wordy, but, it's wordy throughout, so it works.

Haha. I thought I recognized your penname. It's me, yoda, from Life uncut. I can't believe I found randomly. :P

great peice, i can realte, thank you for sharing