A nice piece. I don't usually like the pieces that have no rhyme, but this one had a bit of a rythm and I liked it.

wow.. very well written and sweet yet saad.. I can totally relate great poem

Very good word choice. The sentance fluency is great. Thank you for your review of my poem how to mend a broken heart.

wow. that was awesome

Terribly depressing!But the poem is good =D..i like especially the part about "I’m fading out of timeso rapidly that wind whistles by and leaves mewith third degree burns"...it's really morbid and surreal...

My happily-ever-after fell a few feet shortof its designated fairy tale, but I laughed it offand told you I was okay.

those lines are brilliant, so is the ending. It's a gorgeous poem, expresses so beautifully everything i've been feeling lately... My boyfriend just walked out of a relationship that he was always telling me would last forever... And I don't hate him, like so many people do after breakups, i'm just so numb and empty. I love this poem, you portray the emotions so stunningly clearly.