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| Continuation 2006-12-23 ch 1,  | abuseHaha! I can't say I've ever seen any concrete poetry on here and I'm very impressed! The poem itself may treat a subject used over and over but you brought a fresh element into it and I'm glad to say it's done well! |
| Ollie May 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI like this. I'll be the first to admit that I'm not a fan or know the first thing about poetry but this one I really liked. The shape is wicked and I liked the idea behind the poem as well. All in all, most excellent! Ollie May |
| Girl With Golden Eyes 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseHey really good, I like it a lot, like your other peom to they're both well written. Thanks for the review on my story too. |
| cormorant 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abuse*thumbs* |
| distantorigin 2006-08-03 ch 1, | abusei like how you made the comparison of life and water.thanks for reviewing my story, too! :) |
| aknightsgoldenrose 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful poem. I loved the short lines. |
| lindserly 2005-08-02 ch 1, | abuseMy favourite part of this poem was the simile- Life slipping through my fingers like water. There's something about that, that struck me. Really good job on this :) *Lindsay* |
| Xenila Poe 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this one, and I can relate on some level to what I feel you are trying to present. |
| tulip 2005-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseToo often we dwell on death, tears, and what is horrible in our lives. Sit back and begin to enjoy your life. Stop and listen to the environment around you. Take the time to enjoy now! |
| Owl-of-Artemis 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseWhat is neat to me, even though you may not have intended it, and maybe i'm just a freak- is that the poem itself, seems clipped and short- over too fast, which is what your poem says about life- Very neat, if you intended it, and if you didn't, its still really cool. ^_~ |
| Gothic Spook 2005-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI like it! Having it in the shape of a water droplet is cool! |
| youzi 2005-03-15 ch 1, | abuseAppreciate the effort you put into arranging the text in the shape of water droplets...at least that's what i perceived...but even if it wasn't deliberate it's very cool =D |