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| forbiddenstars 2008-05-23 ch 1,  | thats my real email, btw. 0.0 i kind of get it. the cigaretts bit reminds me of javier..is it? T.T it made me so sad! ...but. it was really good. i don't know, it seems to have a lot of emotion behind it, and its not just random emo-talk. it really...its really good. love it love it love it. |
| Lovedward48 2008-02-24 ch 1, | I like it!^^ |
| Sarah D. F. Wall 2007-04-07 ch 1,  | Personally, I really adored this poem. D: It's sad but it has a definite rythm and story to tell. Bravo! |
| Inu-ChuChu 2007-02-28 ch 1, | This poem is really great. If it were a story, I'd definitely stick around to the end. It doesnt confuse me so much as it brings up good questions like "who are they" and all types of "why?" questions. A job well done!! |
| raelia 2006-04-14 ch 1, | i think i get it. i really like how you portray that actions speak louder than words. this was beautifully written. |
| Cookie Gestapo 2005-09-16 ch 1, | So...they break up (if they were ever dating) and I'm assuming years later they see eachother again but the other guy dosen't remember the other dude? What? |
| .dear. Disaster 2005-07-26 ch 1, | o...kep writing ^.^ |
| m 2005-04-17 ch 1, | I really like the sort of physical presense that's in this. |
| Cuppie 2005-03-17 ch 1, | This is really beautiful. I love it. |
| avani.neglect 2005-03-17 ch 1, | Your slash doesn't inspire me to write slash, but your poetry sure does. |
| Eris Mackenzie 2005-03-15 ch 1, | I get it... *nods* Very nice detail, not something you read everyday. |
| Jeoal 2005-03-15 ch 1, | I love this. I think it might work even better as a poem than a one-shot/story, if that's possible. It was bittersweet and sadly beautiful (I can't name all the images I found perfect). And you say you don't write angst well... :-) |
| rainbowskye 2005-03-15 ch 1, | No matter how many times I read this I still enjoy it, so it doesn't get old which is good in poetry. Well, any kind of writing. Yay! *insert all the LJ comment-y stuff* |
| RatherFresh 2005-03-15 ch 1, | love the last couple of lines.. great job. i think i shall add this to my favorites. : D |