|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Duuude 2008-05-13 ch 25, | abuseThis story is so AMAZING! OMGSH. I didn't think it was possible that one account could have SO MANY GREAT stories, but I've been proven wrong. Wow. Like how many stories have I read so far... like 4 or 5 at the leastest. And I still can't choose between all of them. They're all good. Anyway. OMGSH. No, Kaede cannot do this ! I'LL KILL HIM! RAWR! =[ I feel so sorry for Jack. First Kiera and then Kaede. You know, I knew he'd cut his hair. I knew it! I thought something sad would happen and then he'd cut it off... because he needed a change or something along those lines. Wow. This is pretty sad. I feel like crying. Sadder than Stupid Post-It Notes right about now. And that's saying a lot. =O Nah. He didn't forgive Kaede too quickly. I prefer this to griping over it for weeks and THEN finally forgiving him. Plus, his forgiveness was kind of useless because Kaede dumped him. I realize that I'm simplifying it but I'm mad at Kaede... >.< And I also realize that I'm mad at a fictional character... maybe I should redirect that to the author. EHeheheheh. But I guess Kaede's kind of right.. Imagine he had to kill Jack too. That story about Matthew was so friggin depressing. I did actually cry. =( I don't want that to happen btwn them too... but it obviously will at some point. Plus, what happens when Jack's an old man? He'll be all wrinkly and Kaede'll be hot and young. Haha. That'd be a pretty weird combination don't you think? Maybe it makes sense to get rid of him now... eh. But still, I bet Jack won't be able to live without him. |
| the-truth-is-verity 2008-05-11 ch 26, | abusei just spent the last few chapters sobbing uncontrollably over my rabbit beacuse of this. wow. its so amazing. beautifully written, as well. ah. i just.. i cant even ... describe... i mean, when i read 'post-it notes' i thought i'd never love a story so much, but no ive read this... of course, 'post-it notes' isnt finished yet. but still. absolutely love this. amazing. wow. okay. ill stop rambling now. but it is amazing. |
| Careless Whisperer 2008-05-02 ch 26, | abusewhoots!love this story...was smiling when i read the ending.hahah.love it!:)) |
| Ty Taco 2008-04-17 ch 26, | abuseYou have gotten TONS of reviews on this story, so I know it isn't necessary for me to stroke your ego anymore. You already know your story is PHENOMENAL. It had a really good ending. Thanks for writing novels that are so easy to escape into. xoxoxo, Ty |
| Ty Taco 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseDamn it. You have five books I have not yet read [I already read Stupid Post It Notes...still waiting for 41 by the way] and picking one to read right now was EXCRUSIATINGLY hard. I guarantee you I will eventually read ALL OF THEM. You are an absolutely phenomenal author and your work is truly addicting. If they are all even HALF as good as S.P.I.N [hahahahaha. I didn't even realize that was the acronym until I typed it. thats amazing.] then I will absolutely ADORE them. Anyways, just saying great start to this story and thanks for being a grreat author. lol xoxoxo, Ty |
| alex 2008-04-01 ch 26, anon. | abuseWow. This story is totally brilliant! Not to mention addictive! I just read it in one whole sitting, and am now here to squee over the awesomeness. :D I love how it's from Jack's POV and in language somebody would actually speak. I love Jack's insecurity and wondering mind. I really love Leigh! I love the interaction of Jack and Kaede. Also yay - Australian! It's so refreshing to come across something that isn't American, and that's good. Though I can't figure out where it's set. I'm thinking either NSW or Queensland because you mention Jack having relatives 'down in Victoria'. I'm pretty sure that rules out the other states. :D Though they are still new to me. There were a few typos or whatever but mostly just words pressed together or odd spaces, and a tiny amount of questionable grammar but so much better than most. I loved this so much, and am going to now go off and read your other completed stories. (I can't torture myself with WIPs anymore!) :D Thank you so much for such an enjoyable read! |
| SkyFallOuch 2008-02-20 ch 26, | abuseI love this story. Absolutely brilliant and extremely cute =) (Sorry if this isn't a constructive review...I'm bad at writing them. So yeah, I'll just say your story is too amazing, I lost all words to describe how I feel about it.) Once again, I love it! :D Can't wait to read your other stories ^. |
| abby 2008-02-07 ch 25, anon. | abuseOh my god this chapter made me cry! I love this story so much but this part just made me bawl. Actually, I guess that just shows how much I like it and how attached I am to the characters. But still... |
| XxAmericanxBeautyxX 2008-02-04 ch 26, | abuseLoved the story. You never seem to disappoint every single time I find myself reading a story by you. |
| Vicious Hyperbolizer 2008-01-23 ch 26, | abuseI read the description for this a couple times but thought it wouldn't be to great a story, but OH. MY. GOD. I was wrong. You definitely do not disappoint. |
| SecretWhispers 2008-01-13 ch 26, | abuseAw. That was just so freaking sweet. Kaede and Jack were so adorable together. I loved this story. You are such an amazing writer. |
| Mochii 2008-01-08 ch 26, anon. | abuseLike many reviewers. I hate giving feedback after the story has been completed for like 2 years already but I fucking love this story. I've been hooked on it since umm somewhere around december! The only reason why I read it so slowly is because I wanted it to last. (stupid I know) BUt I love this story so freaking much that I'm about to cry since its ove. But now I have your other fanfictions to look at :D I don't know if I'll ever find a story as well written as this. |
| bugger off 2008-01-08 ch 26, | abusehaha. lol. major fluff. :D so cute. ahahaha. ^_^ i liked this story. good job!! :P *thumbs up |
| bugger off 2008-01-07 ch 19, | abusean angel giving blowjobs. now thats sometihng u don't see everyday. :P |
| bugger off 2008-01-07 ch 16, | abuse:D i like this line: She snorts. "It's always good to know my only child isn't going to be smited because he's having a gay fling with an angel." it is freaking awesome. i dont know why but it is. :D hahaa. has any christians or catholics flamed u for writing about gay angels?? |