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the-truth-is-verity
2008-05-11
ch 26,
abusei just spent the last few chapters sobbing uncontrollably over my rabbit beacuse of this.
wow. its so amazing.
beautifully written, as well.
ah. i just.. i cant even ... describe...
i mean, when i read 'post-it notes' i thought i'd never love a story so much, but no ive read this...
of course, 'post-it notes' isnt finished yet.
but still.
absolutely love this.
amazing.
wow.
okay.
ill stop rambling now.
but it is amazing.
Careless Whisperer
2008-05-02
ch 26,
abusewhoots!love this story...was smiling when i read the ending.hahah.love it!:))
Ty Taco
2008-04-17
ch 26,
abuseYou have gotten TONS of reviews on this story, so I know it isn't necessary for me to stroke your ego anymore.
You already know your story is PHENOMENAL.
It had a really good ending.
Thanks for writing novels that are so easy to escape into.

xoxoxo,
Ty
Ty Taco
2008-04-16
ch 1,
abuseDamn it.

You have five books I have not yet read [I already read Stupid Post It Notes...still waiting for 41 by the way] and picking one to read right now was EXCRUSIATINGLY hard.
I guarantee you I will eventually read ALL OF THEM.

You are an absolutely phenomenal author and your work is truly addicting.
If they are all even HALF as good as S.P.I.N [hahahahaha. I didn't even realize that was the acronym until I typed it. thats amazing.] then I will absolutely ADORE them.

Anyways, just saying great start to this story and thanks for being a grreat author.
lol

xoxoxo,
Ty
alex
2008-04-01
ch 26, anon.
abuseWow. This story is totally brilliant! Not to mention addictive! I just read it in one whole sitting, and am now here to squee over the awesomeness. :D

I love how it's from Jack's POV and in language somebody would actually speak. I love Jack's insecurity and wondering mind. I really love Leigh! I love the interaction of Jack and Kaede.

Also yay - Australian! It's so refreshing to come across something that isn't American, and that's good. Though I can't figure out where it's set. I'm thinking either NSW or Queensland because you mention Jack having relatives 'down in Victoria'. I'm pretty sure that rules out the other states. :D Though they are still new to me.

There were a few typos or whatever but mostly just words pressed together or odd spaces, and a tiny amount of questionable grammar but so much better than most.

I loved this so much, and am going to now go off and read your other completed stories. (I can't torture myself with WIPs anymore!) :D Thank you so much for such an enjoyable read!
SkyFallOuch
2008-02-20
ch 26,
abuseI love this story. Absolutely brilliant and extremely cute =)

(Sorry if this isn't a constructive review...I'm bad at writing them. So yeah, I'll just say your story is too amazing, I lost all words to describe how I feel about it.)

Once again, I love it! :D

Can't wait to read your other stories ^.
abby
2008-02-07
ch 25, anon.
abuseOh my god this chapter made me cry! I love this story so much but this part just made me bawl.
Actually, I guess that just shows how much I like it and how attached I am to the characters. But still...
XxAmericanxBeautyxX
2008-02-04
ch 26,
abuseLoved the story. You never seem to disappoint every single time I find myself reading a story by you.
Vicious Hyperbolizer
2008-01-23
ch 26,
abuseI read the description for this a couple times but thought it wouldn't be to great a story, but OH. MY. GOD. I was wrong. You definitely do not disappoint.
SecretWhispers
2008-01-13
ch 26,
abuseAw. That was just so freaking sweet. Kaede and Jack were so adorable together. I loved this story. You are such an amazing writer.
Mochii
2008-01-08
ch 26, anon.
abuseLike many reviewers. I hate giving feedback after the story has been completed for like 2 years already but I fucking love this story. I've been hooked on it since umm somewhere around december! The only reason why I read it so slowly is because I wanted it to last. (stupid I know) BUt I love this story so freaking much that I'm about to cry since its ove. But now I have your other fanfictions to look at :D I don't know if I'll ever find a story as well written as this.

bugger off
2008-01-08
ch 26,
abusehaha. lol.
major fluff. :D
so cute.
ahahaha. ^_^
i liked this story. good job!! :P *thumbs up
bugger off
2008-01-07
ch 19,
abusean angel giving blowjobs. now thats sometihng u don't see everyday. :P
bugger off
2008-01-07
ch 16,
abuse:D
i like this line:
She snorts. "It's always good to know my only child isn't going to be smited because he's having a gay fling with an angel."
it is freaking awesome.
i dont know why but it is. :D
hahaa.
has any christians or catholics flamed u for writing about gay angels??
Kyuuketsuki-Yaoi Fan-
2007-12-26
ch 26,
abuseEK! It Was A Great Story!
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