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| mars 2005-03-16 ch 1, | so touching. another great. ur bigst fan. |
| CW-nerd-12 2005-03-15 ch 1, | hm.. curious little story. your transition from the sheets to the salon is kind of confusing. Does she work there, does the girl who recognises Joe work there? clarify these little things! |
| Spectre 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Very nice! I like the story line and the overall effect. Just a few confusing lines, but overall, tres bien! |