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| negligible fictional force 2005-04-25 ch 1,   | i love the way you address your readers; i feel like your poem. personalised goodness. -kismet. |
| myno 2005-04-13 ch 1, | i like this one- the rythm is excellent, the comparison good, and the flow natural. |
| CryNowLaughLater 2005-03-29 ch 1, | this is nice, i like this. it's just a grat piece, the ending is fabulous, but in a way it just seems there dshould be more, even though it is long anyways, i don't know what it is am trying to say really, it's good but it just seems as if something is missing for some reason. |
| Sekhmet Johnson 2005-03-24 ch 1, | I love the 'my princess' lines at the end. roundface's told me a lot about you too.. keep it up.. |
| Opium Hex 2005-03-23 ch 1, | I really like this poem. It hits a nerve with me at the moment (pining for someone who's pining for someone else *wry smile*). By the way, you've reviewed my work as Ruby Woo...I won't be using that name any more, so check out OpiumHex...lots of new stuff :D |
| protagonist 2005-03-16 ch 1, | heyya. nicely done. really like it. (: interesting new style. keep writing! [need i say that?] |
| An-Author-At-Heart 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Nice poem, I love the comparison of china dolls and insecurity. Lots of depth here, lots of emotion. It was nicely written. And I totally understand what you mean by "china" doll, I really like porcelain dolls. Good job, keep it up! |
| Macca Lane 2005-03-15 ch 1, | peorsn iremdns me fo somone intersting great pome anyhowwell done son |
| tablesalt 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Ah, I like the imagery, libby. Gorgeous. Libby-lubby. But the repetition /does/ get tiresome after some time, yeah. Lubby. Keep on writing.Liblub! |