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| Casey Drake 2008-06-21 ch 1,  | WHOA how did i miss this?? -blink- -wants to steal it... looks at the tangle of story-threads she already has- -sigh- :) CD |
| Nature's Glory 2007-05-17 ch 4,  | Why isn't this continued? What could be more serious than a princess-turned-dragon, a dumb blonde fascinated by shinys (as usual), and a sexually-confused boy attracted to a dog-man? It was a good laugh, and it could have had more if continued. Lolz, good ol' Franfulkunel |
| La. 2006-10-12 ch 4, | This is a fun story. It's too bad it ends here. |
| Innocent Harbinger of Doom 2005-05-02 ch 4, | Laugh riot! I nearly got caught (4:30am) The names are hilarious. I seriously wonder what happens to these people, and I am genuinely sorry to know that I won't get to find out. |
| Nikolomagne 2005-04-18 ch 3, | Ugh. I hate saying goodbye. It's so awkward and we all tend to distance ourselves emotionally when we have to. Although... even though I will admit that a majority of Americans are cowboys and deprived of kickass foreign music, I must say that not all Americans are like that (I'm not the only non-confomist over here ^_^). But yeah, I don't know why, but the foreign view of Americans isn't very complimentary. I never understood why. I guess it's everyone else who ruins the image. I certainly hope I'm not a jean wearing cowboy, lol. Good story, although, I can see why you ended it, because I don't know how you can continue... maybe if you talk about the airplane trip and the anxiety and longing when you're in America, and when you return to Israel everything is totally and completely different...that might work... it's worth a shot. |
| Innocent Harbinger of Doom 2005-04-11 ch 3, | I always feel a little sad when one of us updates in these things. It's kind of like admitting something has to stay a piece and not a whole... Anyway, I really like this, it makes me feel something, something nameless, but nevertheless important. |
| Nikolomagne 2005-03-31 ch 2, | Hmm, sounds like a good story so far. I wonder though, why is it titled Lilith? Nevertheless, I'd say it's very detailed and you've got a lot of backstory and personalities already developing. I think it can go somewhere with what you have now. ~Nico |
| Nikolomagne 2005-03-31 ch 1, | Cliffhangers are evil and so are you for doing that. Why didn't you ever continue? Gr... this is better than you regard it as. Oh well, onto the next one. ^_^ |
| Innocent Harbinger of Doom 2005-03-18 ch 2, | This does seem like it's going somewhere. Maybe one day you'll know where, whether you get a chance to write it or not. I don't sense a happy ending though, but that's just me. |
| jelie36 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Well I don't think I could write this myself but I definately want to know who does decide to continue it. ^_^ It sounds like an awesome story. -jelie36- |
| Innocent Harbinger of Doom 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Sugokatta~! What d'ya mean 'unsuccessful'? She seems like a girl to me, as well as a perfectly awesome character. |