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| Karma Chameleon 2005-03-15 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting. I like how you use thy, etc. It gives it a nice change from the now traditional words used in poetry. A bit more of a spiritual type poem than I am used to, but good job on this. ~Karma Chameleon |
| AllyCred 2005-03-15 ch 1, | abusei love the last line all i can say is like *WOW* amazing. lots of love ~AllyCred~ P.S.~~thanks for the review appreciate it. |