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| KNE 2005-06-03 ch 1,   | heycan you explain to me what happened in that last part. I kind of lost track of what was going on. It's really good. |
| R.Valaina 2005-04-25 ch 1, | Hi, *thanks for reviewing*, are you going to continue this? I thought it was nice and good! keep it up. by the way I updated, found a chapter yay. Anyway update soon! |
| Eagle Seance 2005-04-10 ch 1, | this is to be continued isn't it? enjoyed reading it. an excellent narrative. |
| HadToBeMe 2005-03-15 ch 1, | the last part is confusing... what happened there? its good though |