I love the closing, I can relate. I have never been given a reason to fight, yet here I am. Anyway, great poem.

This was a great poem. Thank you for reviewing mine. I guess we both write about our feelings. It's just a way to let the emotion out. I really liked this one! Especially the ending. Who would've known?

Ow wow this is just so neat, I just love it! This is just incredible, v/powerful, v/good. wowee! it's very neat, with the first bit, questions, and the last bit, uncaring attitude. "I just don't want to fight futility"... neat... definately angsty, v/angst, v/good, and i v/much like. i might even add it to my faves. yep. Great work!

Nice, it gets moer than one message across to me, onen of them being keep trying even if it only to live, even if you dont want. Except different. I makes me think, ThanksDragon

I know how you feel. Great work.

I've never seen the ocean or gone on a train or plane either. oh yeah and I've never been given a reason to fight. Anyway, what was I saying? Right. I love this poem. Well written and as I've expressed above, I can relate.

*mindblown*

lots of stuff to take in...

"living" is natural surely, not forced. We cannot be anything other than who we are and where we are.

It feels like a dialogue between two people who can't bear to listen to one another. And it's heart-wrenching.

I love it, like: where has my heart gonebut who doneDorien