This totally describes my life right now.. I've written several poems (Definition, All, To Die For, The Taut Rope of Reason, and probably some more that I'm forgetting) about the same thing. It's so frustrating to go through but it's awesome to read something that is fairly synchronized with my stuff. Great work, great job describing emotion accurately.

You've got a good rhythm here. Well written.

I really like this poem! I could really feel a beat. Great job!

Thanks for reviewing my poem! This is a great piece! I love it-it's wicked kool!

I love it! So true to real life! Brilliantly written! The rhyming was excelent which gave it a great flow! Well done!