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Reviews For: World of Lies

kori300
2005-03-22
ch 1,
hello jackie that was great it is kori
Lain Shadow
2005-03-15
ch 1,
I like the way you use lies as a web, I think I understand how you feel and I think that hopefully with poems like these the world will see what it turning into.
Sagaciouspnay
2005-03-15
ch 1,
Excellent job! I couldn't agree with you anymore in this poem -^_^- I love the flow and rhythm of this poem. Very insightful and true...:-(

Thanx for sharing!
Kaitlin S.
2005-03-15
ch 1,
Well done! This poem is EXTREMELY well written...I don't have a lot to say, really. :)
VIKKI NEMORIE
2005-03-15
ch 1,
I really like this poem. Nay, i LOVED it! It had a very good beat and was wonderfully written and i like the meaning of it. Great job!
Gothic Spook
2005-03-15
ch 1,
I love it! Brilliantly written! The rhyming was excelent which gave it a great flow! Brilliant subject! Very true!
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