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| kori300 2005-03-22 ch 1, | hello jackie that was great it is kori |
| Lain Shadow 2005-03-15 ch 1, | I like the way you use lies as a web, I think I understand how you feel and I think that hopefully with poems like these the world will see what it turning into. |
| Sagaciouspnay 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Excellent job! I couldn't agree with you anymore in this poem -^_^- I love the flow and rhythm of this poem. Very insightful and true...:-( Thanx for sharing! |
| Kaitlin S. 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Well done! This poem is EXTREMELY well written...I don't have a lot to say, really. :) |
| VIKKI NEMORIE 2005-03-15 ch 1, | I really like this poem. Nay, i LOVED it! It had a very good beat and was wonderfully written and i like the meaning of it. Great job! |
| Gothic Spook 2005-03-15 ch 1, | I love it! Brilliantly written! The rhyming was excelent which gave it a great flow! Brilliant subject! Very true! |