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| Derdekea 2005-07-08 ch 4,  | abusevery cute. im really enjoying it. |
| Casey Drake 2005-07-08 ch 4, | abusethis is stra-a-a-ange. but cool. :) CD |
| Grape 2005-05-02 ch 3, | abuseThis is a very good story, I like the idea, its very origional idea. I hope the next chapter is posted soon. |
| Derdekea 2005-03-26 ch 1, | abuseCool, I think you should continue. It reminds me of Inu Yasha a lot...and this article I read in a tabloid, about a girl with this rare disease that made her look like a dog...and then she bit the mail man and it was all very entertaining. I like the twist of her being in the store...and the allusion to mutants interests me. Hope this is foreshadowing. |
| Starry Eyed Bunny 2005-03-15 ch 1, | abuseSO O_o' She is a person that has regular blond hair with no actual fur? She has dog ears though and a tail but she can not walk on two legs? And she is in a pet shop? Umm Confused? Will we get to understand background soon? I mean this is interesting... I just like to know what I am getting into reading. Not trying to be mean really! -.-' God BlessBunny |
| LeftoverDreams 2005-03-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is very interesting. I don't think I've ever read anything quite like this. And it's different from what I usually find around here. Keep up the good work! |
| Mr. Onion Rings 2005-03-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat start for a story! I do hope you post more, I'm betting this story will get you no less then a 85%! The only thing is, that I think this might actually become a long story- enough so that it would take too long to write for just an english assigment haha. Best wishes, as well as luck for this story. |
| An Angels Tears 2005-03-15 ch 1, | abusewierd 0.o; but i'm interested |