Wow, pretty. ^_^ I love the imagery... So very beautiful...

I greatly enjoyed the passion throughout this poem. It's very strong.Luvs and Hugs,Sam

Wow - simply amazing. Your alliteration was well done. My english teacher would have been proud. Also, I like how we could feel the sorrow of this poem, yet it's outcome and meaning could still be unique for each reader. Very well done.

This poem describes exactly how I feel at this moment. (I didn't get into the college I wanted and I feel so unwanted and unuseful and like I want to scream or cry...) Momentary Madness and Quiet Sadness describe me perfectly. I love the alliteration and the tone set by this poem. Another excellent job, Dancing Tears! You ought to be proud. ~*Mettie*~

this is great, very sad, but awsome, really, i loved this piece, great work, thank you for sharing