Reviews for Once More and Never Again

Reviews For: Once More and Never Again

Silver Daratraz 2005-06-21 ch 11,	that's just mean!! pouts you killed off SPINNER! starts crying... wah...sob...
Gaki Toki 2005-04-28 ch 11,	What the *? A "scene" then the end?! You SICKO! How could you do this to me? Were you just bored? WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS PICTURE!? But if you are going to end it, end it here, I like it. Ren: Hmm...pokes Spin with a stick* Yup, definitly fakin'... Thad: teary-eyed OH GOD! NO! sob whacks Ren with a rolling pin YOU INSENSITIVE BASTARD! Runs away crying I'm sorry your perhaps last review for a while is such a short one, I'm working on Caramel...it's different this chappie, but it's still interesting.
Gaki Toki 2005-04-27 ch 10,	MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Can I borrow your characters for a second? Thanks even if you said no...haha... End: Ah, I'm losing circulation! Goddamnit! Thad: ohm u... End: What the Hell? Thad: manages to spit out gag I said so am I...tinkles chains to bedpost It's very uncomfortable. End:...where the Hell am I and who the Hell are you? Thad: I'm...sexy and you're...cute...and we're in Ren's room! See only Gaki uses the pink fuzzy cuffs, see these are red! We're in Ren's room... End: I think I'm in the wrong story. Thad: Me too, don't worry, when Ren comes in he'll send you back...or Jason can but you're out of my reach. Jason: walks in Who the *...? Thad: SEND HIM HOME JACE! Jason: Is he gay? End: I used to be a girl... Jason: Oh, well then that's okay, kicks End back into own story* Are you happy now Thad? I'm a nice guy aren't I? Ren: O.O! GET OUT OF MY ROOM YOU SICK *! YOU RAPIST! Thad: Uh Ren...? Ren: NO! MY POOR...SEX MONKEY! Jason: Whatever...walks out* Thad: Ren...? Ren: sob
Gaki Toki 2005-04-18 ch 9,	Okay, I've been leaving these mondo reviews fer people and I'm so sorry but I can't leave a huge one for you, I've got dinner coming and I would wait for later but I can't...I loved this, ADORED this actually but I thought it could have been more...emotional...and being the sadist I am...I think I like the chains more...XD!! I feel like Morbid Maxwell saying things like that! SHAME GAKI SHAME!
KungFuChicken 2005-04-17 ch 9,	Woot! I think I'm gonna be sick :p But.. -le gasp- Chains! Could you imagine, being stuck in such a position? Anywho, G'luck with the Fanfiction, I haven't even seen that show in, ages. You're "sceans" Could use a little work though. ;) Ta ta For now.
Gaki Toki 2005-04-17 ch 8,	Hum...why are they going to bed at 9 AM? I'm so confused don't listen to me! YAYS! Make a scene make a scene! I like scenes, but make it fluffy, not just hardcore sex...I like it fluffy... Of course I am your typical sadist so...whips and chains are sexy too! OH! Chocolate syrup...lol, that's my kind of yaoi! Um...before Thad goes and gets out the- Thad: TOO LATE! Strips and pours chocolate syrup all over his naked body YES, REN COME EAT ME! Ren: O.O...I'm so getting out of here! That's one of the most disgusting things I think I've ever witnessed... Thad: WE CAN USE THE SYRUP AS LUBE! Ren: I'd rather go dry...OH MY GOD I DIDN'T JUST SAY THAT! Jason: Hahahahahahahaha! You *! You'd rather go dry!? You're so dumb how could you let THAT slip?! Ren: shakes up a can of whipped cream and sprays Jason with it* Jason: looks down at himself, horrified YOU BASTARD! Thad: JASON YOU AND I ARE SOULMATES! Ren: More like Split-mates...BANANA SPLIT-MATES! rolls on the floor in laughter Gaki walks in to find Ren laughing hysterically and a naked Thad humping a spazzed out Jason OH MY GOD! REN YOU STUPID *! Ren: Uh-oh...O_o... grins evilly, taking Ren and tying his hands to the bedpost, gagging him* HAHAHAHAHAHA! Now who's laughing pretty boy?! Strips him and lathers his body in banana flavored icecream That cold Ren? Ren: M! OxO...X... Thad: THREE-WAY!
Gaki Toki 2005-04-16 ch 7,	HEY! You got a new reviewer! Don't you feel at all special? I get it! raises hand enthusiastically! I'm busy writing my own story that I just updated and no one wants to read, but I have this week off and all my reviewers don't cause they had it when we were SUPPOSED to! GRR! Anyways, our week off is a whole hell of a lot nicer than their's so...yeah! I'm gonna be at my inspiration spots (yes there are many) and at my computer all the time! Even though I'm lonely without my boyfriend who's in Florida...he called me though, this morning so I felt better...I'll just hang out with Joel for the whole week, he's fun. Tanin's off to Arizona and I'm stuck here in boring ol'd New York with outrageous taxes and right int he middle of the Erie County CRAP! GR...oh well...Joel's fun...we'll just be lonely TOGETHER! sings Piano Man* I'm so bored...
Kung fu Chicken 2005-04-03 ch 6,	Not bad for a story at 4:30 am :p 'bout this everlasting battle? They seemed at peace to me by the end of the story.
Gaki Toki 2005-04-03 ch 6,	Ouch, 4:30? I wouldn't be able to keep my eyes open, much less write a STORY! Anyways, nice chapter, I love how Spinner loves End but just...URGH! sigh Alrighty, there's my review my fingers are so tired from this morning's typing... Jason: Fine just abandon me! Ren: You tried to commit suicide, why should we care about you? Jason: ...casue I just lost all that sex I was getting. Thad: You can get it on with me Jace! slaps own ** Jason: shudders
Gaki Toki 2005-04-02 ch 5,	Damn... Thad: If I only got naked I swear I'd explode! And I'm such a masochist I'd get even more hot at even the THOUGHT of someone punching me! Well...Parker at least... Ren: scootches away Okay Thad, you go get screwed by your brother and...uh, I'll go stall Birdie... Thad: BIRDIE! runs off to get screwed by his lover Ren: Okay I guess Bird is better than Parker...I'm...disoriented...
Gaki Toki 2005-03-26 ch 3,	Bug? Okay, I like this...um, (opens closet) AH! AH! AH! Thad: Whoa...cool! Ren: (faints) Jason: (attempts suicide)
Gaki Toki 2005-03-18 ch 1,	Oh don't worry I WELL acquaited with the concept of prostitution, especially since Thad does that. Thad: What? Did you say my name? Yes, now go back and have Birdie bang you, and tell him Gaki wants $200 for it. I know only your brother would charge that much, but he's introduced you to kink, make it fun! Thad: ...Okay! BIRDIE! (runs off to find his gravytrain) Make End like...well, make some nice scenes, I like scenes, I'd have a few on here if my parents didn't do soemthing...well I suppose if they weren't graphic I could sneak em...oh well, I've got this nasty 12 year old Parker goin' down on a 9 year old Thad one...ew... Anyways, yes me the only one who reads! I feel special cause I love yaoi! His name is so weird though...like Ren's it's shortened to 3 letters but his is so much more...weird...oop! Gotta go, crossing the borders of the Twilight Zone here...

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