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| Faithless Juliet 2006-03-04 ch 1,   | Cute - its always fun to write in that style - brothers can be a pain but what would life be like without them. [In reference to your story:] Sorry, I forgot to add this into the other review. I read your explanation of the outfit in the note at the bottom of the page and let me just say that that was completely unnecessary. This is your world, if you have something to say about it then incorporate it into the actually story - you don’t have to make a note at the end or leave us wondering while we read it “What is she talking about?” - You know what I mean? This is your world, show it to me! Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |
| Dr. Painful 2005-05-29 ch 4, | So these are you thoughts, the summery never lies!^-^ Oh, yea, chapter 6 is up on Sokato: The Mixed Worlds! |
| swtdreamz101 2005-04-16 ch 1, | oo siblings, thank goodness i never had the pleasure or displeasure of having one :D, but they can be ur only ally at times, nice poem |
| SuperGrl2413 2005-04-16 ch 1, | i think it's cool how you write poems. i wish a lot of guys did -lol- i liek this poem. It's good i have baby bro and i know what you mean. I might be posting some of my stuff next week or this sunday soo if you want to read it you can. Hte only thing i'm going to post is HER its the book i'm writting. later, Supergrl2413 |
| Jesse the Storyteller 2005-03-25 ch 1, | That's so cute!! =P I know just how you feel, too... little siblings are a pain and yet you love them. I like how you wrote the poem to his name down the side. Cute! And I like the "My brother, oh BROTHER!" line. ha. Nice poem =D |