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| braggart 2005-04-06 ch 1,   | Yeah, I love this. The imagery in the verses is great. And Joni Mitchell is awesome. |
| simpleplan13 2005-03-20 ch 1, | beautiful.. great job |
| Mango Motercycle 2005-03-15 ch 1, | beautiful! i can't wait to put music to it! |
| PrincessSelphie 2005-03-15 ch 1, | The message here is very prfound, the last line really impacts on the whole piece. This is very touching in many ways, and really thuds into the readers mind with emotion and thoughts of the future and past. |