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| Leaving Here 2006-08-10 ch 1,   | i like it. i really like it. if you could, i would LOVe for you to read one of my poems, I've Done it . thanks so much. keep writing! :)~Liz |
| Novice 17 2006-04-30 ch 1, | *reads the last two lines (bold and underlined)* You got that right! ^_^ |
| Ima-Dorable 2005-07-18 ch 1, | Brilliant! I can totally relate. I love your format and the last two lines are very powerful. "Love is there between people of the same sex,Love knows not male or female."I know how you feel. I'm bi too and I can't stand how people look down on us just because we like guys and girls. Society is messed up. Keep up the good work! |
| Namir Swiftpaw 2005-03-20 ch 1, | You TOTALLY misinterpreted my poem, just to let you know. It was not about gay people - it was about politicians. I wrote it when I was 15, and I have not changed the summary since that time (we've all used gay as an insult...). I also am bisexual, and I don't appreciate you telling me I don't understand. My mom is a lesbian, so I think I understand a bit more than most people. Oh, this was in reference to my poem "Lain Down To Rest O' Brethern Foul". ~Namir Swiftpaw |
| DementedOracle 2005-03-15 ch 1, | This is a good expression of feeling. It's a little unclear in it's message until towards the end (I had to go back and read it again to really get what it was about). Just be who you are and accept others as you would have them accept you. I'm not saying to accept their views on bisexuality, but accept them for people with their own views and don't let yourself grow bitter. Change takes time. |
| PrincessSelphie 2005-03-15 ch 1, | very true! some good messages here |