Jeez, Sumi-chan, your poetry is like...BRILLIANT! You know, if you keep it up at this rate, I'm going to run out of adjectives to describe the greatness of your pieces! Stop being this GOOD, lol. No, seriously, I love the imagery that you evoked here, and this time, your poetic device was "..." Really well done. The opening line was beautiful and gave one a new sense about the rain itself. The feeling of drifting was well done here, and when I read to the end of this poem, I had this blank, dubious expression on this face that a great poem such as this has ended. You must continue writing your beautiful poetry!

chibichocobo

Happy graduation day! XD (When it does come. ^^;) I hope you are doing alright? Is your friend any better?

Beautiful job Sumi-chan. Beautiful as always.

!~* Noelle *~!