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Reviews For: Tales of Sacrilege

midnight
2005-04-14
ch 2,
if I was in the insane catogary Aaryann is, the first thing i'll do is kill you ! Why do ppl always have to do that? I mean now i have to wait (insert how long for you to update here) before reading it again. And First i have to find it! Anyway, pretty pretty please update!
french toast (visitor)
2005-04-11
ch 1,
I absolutely love your story! It's so different and bizarre (in a good way) ... it has given me a lot of inspiration!!

I can't wait for more! when will that be??
eighteen hundred
2005-03-15
ch 1,
Woot, I like this. Before I guess the catastrophe though. I've got just one tiny piece of critisism: There are a few places in the story where your sentences get sort of mixed up, and you might wanna fix those as they interupt the flow. That was the only real thing I noticed.

Now... The catastrophe... Is it the apocolypse?? Is it? That seems too obvious, but maybe. Anyway, update soon^^
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