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| midnight 2005-04-14 ch 2, | if I was in the insane catogary Aaryann is, the first thing i'll do is kill you ! Why do ppl always have to do that? I mean now i have to wait (insert how long for you to update here) before reading it again. And First i have to find it! Anyway, pretty pretty please update! |
| french toast (visitor) 2005-04-11 ch 1, | I absolutely love your story! It's so different and bizarre (in a good way) ... it has given me a lot of inspiration!! I can't wait for more! when will that be?? |
| eighteen hundred 2005-03-15 ch 1, | Woot, I like this. Before I guess the catastrophe though. I've got just one tiny piece of critisism: There are a few places in the story where your sentences get sort of mixed up, and you might wanna fix those as they interupt the flow. That was the only real thing I noticed. Now... The catastrophe... Is it the apocolypse?? Is it? That seems too obvious, but maybe. Anyway, update soon^^ |