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| alice 2008-08-13 ch 9, anon. | abuseomg so i just really have to say this. wow. seriously this story is really something. it was incredible! i mean i just discovered this site in mid june and i've been incredibly addicted, but seriously for the past few days i've been trying to find a good story to read, but i seriously couldn't find ANYTHING. gawd, there are so many stories that are cliched now aren't they? and sometimes i only find a few that i realy really honestly like and where the writing doesn't make me cringe and where it doesn't make me feel incredibly guilty for reading it. haha but ya i really don't know, but something about this story seriously seriously gets to me. i mean, if you think about it this story could kinda be considered cliche couldn't it? BUT i truly think that you took a hackneyed concept and seriously made it so unique and your own. and i respect you for that. almost everything people write about these days could be considered cliche and i get so freakin tired of reading them even though i inevitably do eventually read them. LOL. and OMFREAKINGOSH your writing is really realy good! i mean, i know its not perfect but i honestly can't really say how you could improve your writing...haha sorry that i wasn't much help! :D but ya anyway, goshes, i really don't know. this story really touched me in a way that i really don't understand so ya i can't really explain it. LOL. just know that you've done a good job with this story and i swear, i WILL be waiting for you to finsih it. i know you probably get this a lot, but PLEASE PLEASE finish it. but anyway, if you never do go back to this project, all i can say that the story is already pretty amazing as it is. :P |
| Secret-Lives 2008-07-23 ch 9,  | abuseAwe, I just found this story and loving it... Just wanted to drop a line letting you know that you have one fan out there willing you to continue. |
| arreyn emme 2008-06-12 ch 9, | abuselove the story!! great characterization. I love the tension between halley and gavin and all of the sort of problems they have. Please continue!! |
| rainbabie 2008-05-15 ch 9, | abuse:( You haven't updated in almost a year. Hopefully you will get inspired soon. I really want to know how they got together. How she and Rhett broke up and how she's going to leave her fiance and end up happily ever after with Gavin. *wink wink, nudge nudge* |
| rainbabie 2008-05-15 ch 8, | abuseWOW, that never even entered my though process while reading the past chapters. Her being pregnant and having an abortion really threw me in a loop! |
| rainbabie 2008-05-15 ch 7, | abuseOh my.. Poor Halley! BTW, I love the name Gavin and am in love with him!! Is Halley pronounced like Hail-ley? |
| rainbabie 2008-05-15 ch 6, | abuseI love this rule: I could never sleep with a guy until I memorized his phone number. |
| Jayjack 2008-04-27 ch 9, | abuseoh damn. this sucks. but i will be waiting for an update. no matter how long that may be. ttfn. |
| MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-04-05 ch 9, | abuseWHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED!!? i am frustrated. |
| RunBabyRun 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abusehave i mentioned how much i love this amazing story? |
| Randomisation 2008-02-02 ch 9, | abuseif you do get inspiration then id love to read the rest :D really great writing! |
| Keraven 2008-01-15 ch 9, | abuseThis was the second story I fell in love with last year when I first discovered fictionpress. Just as nice the second time around. I hope inspiration strikes eventually. Good luck! |
| slowlydancingtothestars 2008-01-14 ch 9, anon. | abuseplease finish! I REALLY want to read another chapter. Try again I"m waiting! |
| gulistanlik 2007-12-08 ch 9, | abuseWoah Alex just walked in through the door? Now everything is starting to add up! They broke up with Gavin because she had an abortion and it was a long distance relationship? Who else knows about the abortion? Wow, these two have a very deep past hey? I like this fic, there's kind of two stories going at once. The present, and the past as memories. I like that. Keep up the good work and I hope your writer's block will keel over and die! gulistanlik P.S. I also like the fact that you have such humanly realistic things going on in here, it's kind of a cliche except it's realistic and pulled off nicely. Keep going. =D |
| slightlyaddictedx3 2007-10-31 ch 9, | abusei |