im sorri! i have to say this...ur story name is the same as a simple plan song...not on the album...but still! and DO NOT tell me to crawl into a hole! a untitled video up! but only 30 secs!!:'( congrats on eco!

hey i hadnt read the third chap! u sed i had..stupid...i lyk the story tho...very sorry for mahhew( wierd name!)..wat did u get for it anyway? i got 18 for mine..yay =D

Hehe, I got my name on a story... well sorta. =P

I really like it, especially the ending. I looks like Chels has grown up. ^^

Nice finish! I wish a situation could work out like that for everyone, but unfortunate, not everyone is that fortunate. But very nice write. And if this topic interests you or whatever, please check out my story I'm presently working on, Hiding Behind the Harmony.

Nice start! You write very realistically, and are right on. And I love how you switch back and forth with the POV's. They're awesome. You'rea very good authro, keep it up, I'm reading on.

That's awesome. =) It really shows the emotion well. I almost felt like crying when Mahew did too, and the diary and the mom talking to herself was neat. ^^ Can't wait for the next installment, please R/R! =D