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| SleepDontWeep 2005-03-24 ch 1,   | this is such a weird one off.. it really leaves me wonderin... so off i go... wonderin... hm... i love u... still wonderin.. hm..( nice desriptions by d way)x |
| Sinead 2005-03-18 ch 1, | I liked the opening paragraph, very descriptive. That's all that I got to read of this earlier. Rex still could be cat, well maybe not with that name. I don't seem why there are no guide cats. Maybe cats are being discriminated against... I liked the characters.Paulo's 'wisdom' made him seem realer, despite the fact that realer is not a word. The website I was talking about only has around 200 members so stories are less likely to be ignored. It's way smaller than here, obviously with the amount of members. It's called w.writersintouch.com Check it out if you're interested. |