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| Dreaming of Delirium 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseHm... I like your style... But I also think that you may be generalizing drug addicts; I mean, not all people who use/or are addicts have such behavior. But -- regardless of that, it was a decent... erm start? I wasn't really sure if this was a one-shot. I think it could go either way if you wanted it. Anyways, sorry for this random review -- it sort of jumps all over. :P It's late here, what can I say? :) Cheers. |
| superhero ego 2005-03-16 ch 1, | abuseGood start. |