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| Sarah 2008-07-04 ch 7, anon. | abuseYou don’t look fat to me. But maybe Ken needs glasses or something.” He stretched his arms above his head and yawned. “I’m gonna go take that shower. And then I’m gonna go to bed.” I love the story... but isn't that supposed to be Neil ^ not Ken? |
| Nicole Deming 2007-11-24 ch 1,  | abuseI just finished this story I think it was great. |
| pinkfluffyoranges 2007-10-18 ch 22, | abuseThis is a trulty beautiful story.It was so dramatic yet lighthearted and you didn't drag it out. I loved the wedding, it was ingenius. Truly loved your work, I'm looking forwad to reading more of your creations. |
| LadyLush 2007-08-03 ch 22, | abusei loved this story it was really well written and the characters werent perfect so it wasnt as predictble as these stories usually are :) i kinda hated ken at first but towards the end i completely fell in love with him lol i'm so happy they got together. well done on a fantastic story x |
| AJS 2007-06-24 ch 22, | abuseCute ending. Hahaha the triplet thing was a little goofy but a nice, light-hearted touch. It's so nice to see that Ken was so persistent about getting her to admit her feelings in the end, though I think a lot of that drive of his came from her small reassurances that it really was him that she loved and not Neal. It would have been nice to actually see it be Jeannie, in the end, who made that decision to trust him and everything, by telling Neal that she couldn't go through with the wedding, but it seems to me like she was already ready to tell that to Neal anyways. Or maybe I'm hoping (: Cute story, anyways. Lots of sexual tension and hot make out scenes. Keep up the good work and continue writing! -- Alyssa |
| cute on the spot 2007-04-04 ch 22, | abusenice |
| Tempest116 2007-04-03 ch 22, | abuseNice story. ^_^ |
| Raomina 2007-02-19 ch 3, | abusejust a little correction. you always spell 'break' as 'brake', and 'shall' as 'shell'. I've seen that in your other story as well. |
| Tecna 2007-02-15 ch 22, | abuseHey, Yes, I know I'm like inifite times late, but I just saw this story, so I've read it all today, from chapter one. I have to say that this was a fantastic story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading, especially since I couldn't take my eyes off it long enough to revise, but still totally worth it. Brill work! Great story! |
| siddika 2007-01-20 ch 22, | abuseJUST LOVED IT. |
| unconnected14 2006-12-26 ch 22, | abuseAw. That story was so cute. I loved it. You're an amazing writer. |
| youpin 2006-12-25 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. |
| sussex 2006-12-02 ch 22, | abusesweet:P |
| dramaqueen90 2006-10-26 ch 22, anon. | abuseoh my god. that was so sweet!! :D i want a ken too! bard pitt is like the most beautiful man on the planet :) |
| raaaaaandom 2006-09-16 ch 22, anon. | abuseLUV UR STORY!...very well written and quite addicting too...cnt wait to read more of ya stories... |