Interesting...sort of reminds me of that 70s show when the chars smoke a little happy weed...but other than that I like it alot. I love the repitition and the flow. It was interesting. good piece.

I like your style. It has such a ring to it. I like the flowing and description to it. great job.

I think I like your style. There is something dreamy about this... which is appropriate for something about dreams!