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Reviews For: Road to Paradise
Pharaoh's Wife 2005-04-16 . chapter 1
I could almost sing to that! Very nice!
in theory 2005-04-11 . chapter 1
I like this, it seems happy and bouncy. I can imagine it as a song, it has that format to it. Nice work. +MM+
Celyn 2005-03-17 . chapter 1
Nice. This poem is thoughtful, and the "Ya Ya Ya!" is a nice punctuation.
M. R. Smale 2005-03-16 . chapter 1
Very enlightening and thought provoking. Keep up the excellent work!
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