Hey! This is interesting, makes me feel kind of lonely inside. I used to feel this way... The rhymes go so smoothly its like your actually feeling it ya know?

Yep, that's about how I feel right now. I'm sorry you feel that way, too. It's a little short, but it's very good. My favorite line is "I can't go back - don't wanna move on." If that aint the story of my life, I don't know what is. I love you, babe. Good job. ~*Mettie*~

Hi there! It's pretty sweet! seriously. in a sad way, you need some anti-depressants! Just Kidding!

aw... thats sad... but the emotions you expressed in this was vivid and well done~~ keep writing!